Very intresting... nicely coverd and nicely done.. love your poem
i am giving you 5/5

Nice technique, the words you used were well chosen. and the meaning behind it was very thoughtful. if i actually know exactly wat it is...

5/5 David

I had to read it twice to really understand, but when i got it i loved it!

I love the word choice, to start all the lines with R's and have them run thoroughly. Good job.

5/5