Thats a kool poem i liked it.

love ya jason

This poem started out pretty well. the idea was great. but i think it wasnt very clear who you were talking about at times. sometimes it sounded like you were talking about your sibling, and i thought you were untill i read "who wants to be pretty". maybe i just read it wrong, but i think the flow was...non-existant. it seemed sort of like a run on sentance, not a poem.
--TheGothicAlbino

Niiice, basically givin us an insight into ur life

It was short yet full of great emotion!
awesome poem!
5/5
--Jess
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Wow wow wow! very hmm.. jumpy poem but in a good way.. =] kinda got me 2 lift my head up a bit if u no wat i mean! very very good! =]]
keep writing! your friends are right when they say you are good!!!
5/5!
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