Comments : My Sweet Forever

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Another beautiful poem of true love......I like the repetion of forever throughout....nice touch....

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Very beautiful poem. Losing the one we love is the deepest pain.

    When all the force of my love goes
    Returning here quite never,
    At last I've gone to be with she
    Who is 'my sweet forever'.

    If only we had the choice.
    Take Care Cindy