Nawww i love the wai u ended it
very sweet
ur a great writer
.x

Your really talented... you rock my socks!!!

I love this poem.Its really good.You are a great writer.

Kelsie

What a beautifully written poem ,well done.

Your poem is great, and the flow magnificent.

The mystery captures this poem from begining to the end and it was so sad and sorrowful..and you reflected the feeling being alone so amazing on this masterpiece..I liked the story,it blew me away and it was so breathtaking and the flow keeps you going
It deserves a 5
Keep it up,
Laura

Its very mystical... it caught my eye i thought that is would end really sadly but it truned out to be good in the end
great work
5/5

keep up the good work
-Amelia

This poem was wonderful.How well you have written this.It was sad,emotional and deep.How well you have captured and bestowed here.Good job in this piece.
All the best and take care.

This is really sad. 5/5, Em