Teria, this was another awesome piece. with vocabulary so pure, imagery so vivid.
again, a lovely piece written by a lovely person.
Love Tara-Kay
xx

I loved it. Especially the way the 1st stanza was repeated, it made the poem seem like a circle (if that makes any sense), could really relate to it and yeah, good poem =]

This poem was excellent.
just love it.

You've fallen far behind the rest,
beating around the bush.
Boy, you're doing it all wrong,
I'm here to give you a push.

Hello, My name is distance.
I've come from far away,
I live within your dreams
the ones that fade day by day..

great stanza.
best wishes
and take care.
emmeline