Good job....nicely written....like the message...All the best, Debbie

Lovely poem as always mate :)
5/5.

Youre really good at poems. keep it up
5/5
thanks for the comment
Megan<33

This is a good poem andrew like the way you changes rhyme schemes, i give this a 5/5!! thanx for reading my poem, keep these coming!!!

Your best bet is better
then the rest so please
dont fret.

-short, sweet and catchy. i liked it gud job

This is nice.
I think you should try and put more emotion into it.
But other than that it's pretty good.
_AMber_

P.s. Thanks for the comment

After reading most of your poems I have to say that this is my favorite one...Thumbs Up! Keep 'em coming and a 5/5 from me :)