Wow you write such beautiful poem i envy thee 5/5 i wrote a new one

Debbie
Very vivid imagery and excellent word choices. Your poems always touch me.

Why hope as brilliant daybreaks
Long night put to sleep
Lost and lonely heartbreaks
Eternal shadow's deep

These lines really tugged at my heart.
Excellent.
Love Cindy

Debbie,
I loved this. It was really deep and emotional, the vocab was awesome and the imagery was so vivid.
Its so beautiful, it makes me wanna cry.
Love Tara-Kay

I tried to find my favourite stanza, but I loved them all. The whole poem was just amazing, and so true. It flowed so perfectly. A truly amazing write, haven't read a good poem in a while. Never stop writing. 5/5

` Liz =]

This poem really have so much depth and meaning.Very well penned .

What a poignant and beautiful piece. This struck a chord within me brutally. How I was blown away by this 'eye-opener' cannot be verbalized.

Utterly astounding!

Love,
Debbie

Why pray on tainted alters
Deaf saints hear no screams

^^loved those lines. They were really appealing to me.

Very great job on this peice. It was written beautifully.... 5/5

Deb,

"Why hold the hand of sorrow
Tears show such disdain
Thorns will bloom tomorrow
In floods of salty rain

Why pray on tainted alters
Deaf saints hear no screams
Pious lips will falter
Taste bitter broken dreams"

Absolutely brilliant.

Bravo!!!

Always,
Jeannie

Mom,

Beautiful and thought provoking. I loved your word choice. Excellent job!

That was a really thought provoking poem, i loved the interesting imagery.. keep it up!

daire x

I really like this poem it is very deep and emotional and it is writen like a true poet

Beautiful poem.
Full of emotion.
Great flow and the perfect words.
Loved reading it.

Nice job

Absolutely beautiful sad poems you penned here, simply yet very inspirations write....Bert.~

Very nice!

This poem was so emotional.it was so sad and deep.

Why pray on tainted alters
Deaf saints hear no screams
Pious lips will falter
Taste bitter broken dreams

this stanza was great.
best wishes
and take care
emmeline

Great Poem! It touched me so mcuh!

That was deep i love it

DiiSZ iiSZ SUCH A BEAUTiiFUL POEM 5/5