Wow.. thats really really good, i totally know what your saying you pretty much put all my thoughts in to words
keep it up
~rachel

I love it.. its so good.. i can relate 2 this so much..
very good writer..
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Wonderful. I really like the expressions you used, they brought great imagery and emotion. I liked how you started questioning near the end, I think it really brought the poem together as in what was happening to the speaker. Great Job! :]