It's funny how a simple and short poem such as this can hit a nerve in my heart and make my eyes tear up.I love this poem mainly because I feel it myself.5/5

---amber---

I've already commented this one..but i noticed something that i didnt point out.. this is really good.. i enjoyed reading it.. but

"The flowers are no more fresh"

^^ in this line ... it didnt really make sense.. maybe something like this would sound better... "the flowers are no longer fresh"

it just sounds smoother like that.

overall i liked it. 5/5

You are not alone dear! With this piece I wanna be your best buddy! You are not just alone

Tc