Good poem a lot of feelings and has a good flow well done xxxx

Wow this one is reeally good!!I felt a rythym while I read it.

Hey :]
i really enjoyed reading all your poems XD
i liked i love.. the best but this is the one i ended up commenting

it has pretty great flow and its really emotional :]

you have some great talent :P

hope to see you write some more poems :P

Beautifully written, excellent flow, brillant word choice and strong emotions well penned. you did an excelent job on this poem I would have to say that it is perfect, I see no room for improvement here 5/5

Ive = I've
i= I
its= it's
im= I'm
^ I'm really bothered by this kind of mistakes.
Except these mistakes, poem is good, but you could use more punctuation in it.
I'll give you 4/5

Great poem. I loved the word choice. It also had a nice flow to it. I gave it a 5/5.