Awww this is SOOOO KIUT!!!!!!! I LUV IT!!!

Omg....that's deep.

I love this one...nice work 5/5 =D

Lovely. Emotions are well expressed and to the point. Short and sweet. Good job.
Alex

Wow such strong feelings of love well writtn great flow, and excellent word choice 5/5

Hey, I already commented this one but my comment sucked! lol so here ya go...

The flow was really good. It was the perfect love poem. What better way to express your love then saying everything you love about a person? lol it was FABULOUS! lol great JOB! 5/5

It's really beautiful, and I can imagine the experiance; it really puts me in the moment.

Great work Loren,

Kindly yours,
~Richi~

Hey, great poem. I really liked it alot though I be sure why. I gave it a 5/5.