Oh no, shivers through my body!!! and tears!!! i really really do like this poem, i like all your feelings and it sounds like such a struglle you have been through and i understand how much you want it to just disappear but oyu gotta be strong, your writing is a great escape and i will continue to read your work, hold on be strong and im always here xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Omg this is so sad, sorrow invades me as I continue reading this...inspiring

Wow... its so sad and sad.
i hope your fine because the only way you could write that is if you are sad so i hope your ok! and keep up the awsum work!

xx

I could have dropped a few tears on this poem, but I held it in. I felt like I was being punched around from place to place like the narrator describes. Like a battle to reach some end, any end. Which is why I am quite dissapointed with the last few words. I think, although, it was expressing feeling, the narrator could of done better by giving some kind of definity to an end or a path to an end of his/her struggles. Other than that, I loved the story, the rhyme was fantastically placed; and, is a all around great poem.

Dang that was awesome, i am almost speechless, the emotion was powerfully strong, the flow was excellent, the word choice was amazing simple yet effective really this is one of the best poems I have read all day 5/5

Great poem. it was so capturative and so deep as well as powerful. i felt the emotions, every bit of the pain :( 5/5 love.

I love your work, you really write some deep stuff.
Another one truly amazing, with great flow and choice of words. This one's so touching and beautifully written, deserves more then 5/5.
Great job!

You definitely, definitely, definitely have real poetry talent! Every poem you write is mind blowing and i love every single one of them, but this is my fav.
5/5 and faved!
Sarah xx

Wow, my parents are divorced too. i also hate my step-mom. i don't know all of your emotions, but i do know of the hating the person your dad loves and the fight for his attention. but anyway, we've learned to put that emotion into artwork. great job! 5/5!

Such a moving poem. I can totally relate to it. It's so sad, I can feel all the emotion put in it. Great piece!! 5/5 dear.

This iz great itz lik readen a story..parents juz don know wat kind of effect they have on there children this tells alot