In this poem are you talking to someone is it directing to a certain someone coz i dont really under stand it but otherwise it seems great just confusing if you no what i mean xoxox

Wow ur poem says the truth about the way life is and you shouldn't go blind to the world!! nice work and looking forward to read some more!!

This is great.. i love every line and i love the meaning behind it.. excellent job.. keep it up and thanks for the comment =]

Love it!
excellent poem :]]
5/5.