Awww no thats sad, good writing though well done xxxxxxxxx

Gre

Great writing I love it

Sad poem mate but I like the way its written great job keep it up.
Phil

"They never listen
just keep accusing
I can't win
I'm always losing."

Tracy,
Have we not all felt like this at one time or another. Fighting the demons in our hearts, souls and mind until we are weak and feel our only solution is death Still, we struggle on, hoping that time will give us relief. I know the pain from which you come will always show in your writes because it is what has made you who you are today.

Never give up the fight.

Always,
Jeannie

They never listen
just keep accusing
I can't win
I'm always losing.
This was my favorite Stanza. The flow was pretty easy to catch...It was a pretty good poem. I really like it...Overall 5/5..

That was sad! but a great story..
robyn xoxo

Great poem.
Sad, but I enjoyed reading it.

Very sad but good writing!