WOW! I am impressed! My favorite parts were these
"I crave your love
I live on your touch"
and
"You stripped my sanity
And left me bare
Without you I'm nothing
I don't have a prayer"

Those were amazing! I think this is an amazing start for your songs! Great job!
And as a side note...thank you for all your comments. I was expecting some criticism, but not a hint of it. Thanks, it was a much needed pick me up!
Charisma*

"You stripped my sanity
And left me bare
Without you I'm nothing
I don't have a prayer
I'm addicted to you
This drug so rare
I become possessive
You I can't share"

Ooo, i like! I don't normally do very well on reading songs but this one, i had a little tune running through my head. Very nice indeed
I'm quite shocked it only had one comment actually!
You should be proud of this piece
5/5
*Gem*