Piece by piece,
We try to figure out who we are.
Sometimes we get close,
But sometimes we're just too far.

^ i really like this stanza. it is something i have be reflecting on lately. i like the rythm 5/5

Wow this poem was great and i love reading it
carly

Wow, this poem is so true! I loved reading it!

Piece by piece,
We try to figure out who we are.
Sometimes we get close,
But sometimes we're just too far.

^^^I think that was my favorite stanza!

But the rest was ((amazing)) too!
Nicely penned
Great to read
It's for sure a
5/5!

I must agree with xbeyond helpx's comment.
=]

Excellent work :) kept me interested , had nice flow and rhythem and its very true.

Good job :)
5/5