Really deep piece, with great choice of words.
Second stanza is my favorite "And love comes cheap,
I bought every single lie." - amazing lines.
5/5

Awww. this is really good. the rhythem is off in some places. but the moral of the poem is wonderful. very well done.

xo kisses xo

Wow i know waht you mean the power of love 5/5

Great poem!!! 5/5... no i think me and my partner are done but now i can say to our friends we tryed so long its been like 11 months! almost a year but i guess it went wrong

Great poem.The emotions are expressed in a great way.

Kelsie

This is good.
totally relatable.
keep it up.
<3jess

I really liked it =)

Wow, that's really sad, I loved the topic, and the explanation, Your emotions come through loud and clear I really loved it~! 5.5!

The flow to this poem was real good at first then in the middle I think the started to go another way completely. Well it read kinda choppy from there. I like your use of some words and your explained yourself well but the flow was off just a tad bit Plot121