Comments : Dancing On The Edge (Collab)

  • 18 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nitin
    Once again you have given me so many wonderful memories. I have never had a friend like you. You have such a kind and giving heart. Thanks for sharing so much of yourself with me.
    Love you yaar
    Cindy

  • 18 years ago

    by chavii

    Nitin , everytime i read a collab poem by you two i think this one must be best but every time you two prove me wrong and i'm glad for it.
    The poem is like music playing notes of perfect love harmony,Each line is so beautiful and heartfelt even words couldn express.
    BRAVO !

    Take care
    chavii.

  • 18 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Beautiful as always.....romantic and intense....you and Cindy write so well on your collabs, hard to tell who wrote which verse! Take care, Debbie

  • 18 years ago

    by Lithium

    Beautiful work guys, whenever you work together you come up with such fantasic pieces full of talent and warmth great job xox sam

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    That was really good poem!!!! xx

  • 18 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Lovely penned within beautiful emotions you express here, and i find this stanza, just beautiful yet couldn't explain within words..

    Cradle of desire dancing in flames
    With angels of love hand in hand
    Singing in your ears down below
    Echo of my heart in promise land

    have a good day,

    best wishes, Bert.

  • 18 years ago

    by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    Ohh...I loved this poem! Congratulations to you two, it was wondeful, I cant say more, I just loved every single word you used here.Very beautifully written, keep writing this way!5/5
    Best wishes,

    TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    Pst.Im back after a long time, so dont worry about commenting back, I still havent had the time to post new work.Take care!

  • 18 years ago

    by Debbie

    Like what I've said on Ms. Cindy's account,

    Verily, this is such a stunning success for something written in collaboration with another exceptional poet. I always admire how both of you magically weave words into an extremely endearing work of art. I adored it.

    Lovely work, as always!

    Love,
    Debbie

  • 18 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    Hey!!!
    This poem was very well written.You two have done an excellent job!!!!!Each stanza was very well written.I'm blown away with your talent.You two work together, It makes the flow of the poem even better.Good job on this piece.You have expressed love very well.
    Hope to see another poem of yours.
    Take Care