All I heard was sorrow
All I felt was fear
But I stayed strong
Never dropping a tear.

Terrific! Absoutly terrific! I have felt like this many times especially when I lost my nephew 4 months ago, but I stayed strong and helped my brother through it ( it was his son)! Your poem was very deep! Keep up the good work!

...Kinda catchy. Overall it's got a nice flow and rhyme but not my style. Words went well with this piece though I think it could have been a little more...um, pointed I guess. Still it fit this piece well. Short but not too short or too long.
~Faith-less

I love the images on the night sky and the moon that you poem coveys. Very good !!

You have a way with words. I like the part where the moon was like your savior. I'll give it a 5/5. Keep up the good work. Ãœ