Nice one .. i like it a lot ... good job

Its great the words just flow and when i read it it makes me think of my beloved one. I truly admire this one. Goodjob

You better believe it... ;-)

Beautifully written. 5/5

I really love this poem and you write so beautifully

Oh my god this is beautiful
i feel the emotion you must have felt so clearly
i can only keep telling you that i love all of your poems they are amazing

Pitty-Pity

This is beautiful...I love this...this made me smile, and by the time I had finished reading, I was left with a smile on my face.
Again for the most part flow is very good, I love the imagery you portrayed in this piece and both the word choice and rhyme scheme are enjoyable...beautiful work.

Gooooooooddddddddd

Gooooooooddddddddd