Hey,
an awesome poem, the flow is good but sometimes a bit rocky, the rhyming its perfect, many can relate to it I think, well i can't relate to it, and im glad I can't ^_^
good work 5/5 from me!
kisses stephanie

Nice poem.
Great flow and good rhyming.
A sad poem too.
Well done!

Thanx for ur comment
Greatly Appreciated!!!!
Well it was really hard 2 just pick one of ur poems 2 comment on bc they all pretty good!!! But i can relate 2 this one pretty well! Good Job!

I'm so glad my poem touched you..=) thanks for that comment.
this poem is absolutely amazing! i really enjoyed it. your words really speak the truth. great job! =]
i'm gonna check out some of your other poems as well

Such truths and realities can be applied to many harsh loves in the world. For many of us, in our desire to be loved and cared for, we give up our hearts to those who care only for the body that carries it, and they have no regard for the heart or soul. This happens to both women and men.

But as always, your poetry is of exceptional beauty. You write with the wisdom and intelligence of an old wisened man, and with the love and beauty a woman in love would know.

Wow, awesome and amazing poem i really love it. its a nice msg for girls but i hope girls can take it seriously lol

"He calls you baby cause he forgets your name" hahaha i really liked this one

keep up the good work