Wow, I love this poem sweetheart.
Is Penny Avenue an actual place there?
Or is it just a place you made up for the poem?
It's really good. you've always been such a good writer.
Love you babyz.
xo

-SJG

Penny Avenue isabout a girl, whose last name is Penny, i just used the street as a metaphore as to the relationship she and I experience. =)

Hey Ben,
You're such a fantastic writer. I really don't know where you get all you metaphores and put them all together so well. Beautiful work (as usual).
Love Greta x

I love the part of the chocolate dollars melting under her feet. You created a very lonely feel in this poem and it's almost haunting. I love it.

5/5