This is a grea tpoem, I could picture what was happeneing and the emotions that you felt. Granted I could never truly know any of that but I think I got the idea. It isn't easy to protray emotions as clearly as you did in this poem. Great job, never stop writing. 5/5

-Love, Becky

Wow. that was a really great poem. the emotions were so deep. 5/5

Great work!
keep it up
-Lisa