Comments : STONE ROSES

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Awesome penned yet unique style writing, you know how to write them....and i thought you would like to read 2 stanza poems at below, i will post them soon....anyway, have a good day! Bert.

    My smock of silk, both faired and white
    With gold embroidered gorgeously
    Thy petticoat of Sandal right
    And thus I bought thee gladly.

    Thy girdle of gold so red
    With pearls bedecked sumptuously
    The like no other lasses had
    And yet thou wouldst not love me.

  • 16 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    This poem was beautifully written.It was unique from all the poems.The flow was smooth and the imagery was perfect.Very well written.
    best wishes
    and take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Tammy

    Gary, that was so beautiful. It really touched my heart.
    Loved the writing style.
    take care
    Tammy

  • 16 years ago

    by Edward D Zurovec

    A profound writing my friend seeming as a prayer, calling out, burning bridges,vowing to be a better man, changed, resurrected and clear eyed to your Plea of never ending Love.
    To think of a Rose, never dying, always fragrant , forever pretty, Stones me.
    Beautiful Poem
    Peace and Blessings

  • 15 years ago

    by Sourav

    This seems very inspirational. Inspirational like your writing. So very captivating and strong piece of writing.