Comments : Touchdown and Turnaround ( Don't give up on me )

  • 16 years ago

    by skye16

    B-e-a-utiful

  • 16 years ago

    by Kurt

    This was a short poem and the message was sweet. Everything clicked well together and it made me happy when I read it. Great write 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Cute poem.
    Enjoyed reading it.
    Well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I really liked it
    i thought that it was
    cute
    and sweet
    and i love football
    and i liked how u incorporated
    it into the whole poem

    5/5