You could make it a little longer, but it still holds so much beauty and emotions. The last line -From here, till eternity end- is very captivating.
5/5

Love it! It is beautiful!!! Really it is beautiful...

Nazeer

SO mucH efficienT writinG. you'vE alwayS gooD aT youR joB. dE expressioN giveN herE iS verY mucH amazinG anD feelinG betteR tO reaD anD commenT...

theN 'A' gradE oN diS poeM iS possiblE, yoU deservE.... reallY yoU deservE. i aM prouD oN youR writinG aS welL aS oN youR preciouS feelingS towarD minE anD nazeeR's writingS.

thX 4 writinG anD keepinG uS iN pleasurE...

diS iS..... luzaN