This is such a beautifully written piece and one that in a way reflects my own feelings ,as there is something I want but can't have ,and my wnat is just causing so much pain.A brilliant write ,well done and take care.

A nice love poem to this guy. well done. lucas i hope knows you love him. and that he loves you back. you deserve it.

5/5 David

Well written and laoded with expression.
From this write I get the image of longing and heartache.

Very good poem!..i can really relate..