"You think that i don't know, but i can tell you now i do.
You don't now how it feels until it's done to you."

Excellent rhyming here. The flow was spot on.
For a beginner, you've got a nice rhythm
5.5
*gem*

This was a really really good poem = ] i liked this one alot anyways 5/5

Another amazing poem! well written its definately quality material!
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