"You're just a memory know, maybe one day you will see, i never meant to hurt you you're everything to me."

I liked the last line a lot, it was very poignant and really touched the heart.
Well done
5/5
*Gem*

Hmm for someone who jsut started this was like really good... it sounds like its a song with the flow and everything keep it up = ] 5/5

This poem is excellent i hope to read more from you in the future :) ur poems have true emotions in them and u describe them well xx

Really well written, like i said don't get hung up too much on critics* the emotion, the talent and sheer power of language is there!
once again a fab write!