Comments : Kiss Me Goodbye.

  • 16 years ago

    by skye16

    I read it and the impact was near that of being shot it's wonderful...in a sad way

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Nice poem... Very sad but at the same time very effective too...

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    I really liked the story line to this poem it read well, and the descriptions of not only your emotions but the surrounding was done quite well great job all and all I gave it a 5 out of 5 give yourself a pat on the back Plot121

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very mournful poem with good use of lexis and overall flow was great. I like the imagery and the intentnded message is clear. Nice!!

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    What a sad and yet beautiful poem. Such a tragedy....but with this poem you have made a lasting tribute to your beloved brother. Very well done!!

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid