Wow Nicely Said... You are very talented.. I hope you will keep writing..

Wow, this is a really good poem. you basiclly put all my thoughts down on paper, or, um, text.
but yeah, I tried telling my friend this same thing, but she told me to eff-off, so yeah. I should show her this! Thank you!

Eh... dont know what to say...
thanks. lol
Good luck with your friend!
sarah xx

Nice poem...i think there were a few grammer mistakes but it was still great..good job!

~michelle~

I can really relate!!! it was beaytifully written u have a great gift!! i hope u keep writing! i enjoy ur work!!!

Thats really good Sarah!

Thank you XD

Really great poem...you're very talented...keep it up =)

Wow
its so true
hmmmmmmm nicely writen

This is like a poem about me lol i used to think those same thoughts.... its a great poem it tells lots of ppl a lesson and it gives them advice i luv it ..... keep up the good work and if u can plz go to my poems "Sakos Story" and "Why some teens dont use their heads"

<3 Mary

Really well written. I really don't know what to say I've read so much today and this out of all of them has been the most open and easy to understand and I'm not sure if it's too easy and too fiesty. But all the same. It was an enjoyable read.
Poppet.