Its a great poem i can tell that u really care about your friend....keep up the good work

thanks for the comment u left me

This is really good... though maybe you should try to split it up more so that readers can tell it is a poem,,, dont get me wrong it is really good and it is really origional, but maybe you should put it in a poem format.
<3jess

Thanks for telling me i will do it soon :):):):)

I like it its very smooth, good writing piece here