Wow i like this so much i dunno what it is about it but so awesome

Wow, i really love this poem, specially the end, (you passed the test) i wish my girl would test me once to see that i can pass the hardest test ever...
i really love this poem, keep it up

It was so cute and touching and in my own opinion it would be best on love poems but it is just a suggestions

You really had a great ending with those

I wanted to be wholly yours
And now you've passed the test

Keep it up,
Laura

Wow, I love this poem!!!
You are truly a follower in Christ and He is surly smiling down at you and praising you for writting a poem not only about him and his word but also about evangelism.
May God Bless Your Day

Quite the talent you have dont you.
ive read alot of your poems and you cease to amaze me.

My world came crashing down
One terrifying night
Then you came into my life
And now I've seen the light

These lines are so well written with the best word choice and flow. Great art of work indeed. Your style is superb. God bless you. Max ratings

Tc

It's great. ^^
I love the ending. ^^
And it flows nicely too..
Beautiful poem. ^^

"You cam when I called" < came.

Amazing poem.
I absolutely loved it.
It could be a religious OR love poem.
Which I love, because I take it both ways; with two different things/people.
God&TheGuyILove.
Lol.

Amazing work, keep it up dear.

That was amazing!

It was awesome, it should be entered into somekind of contest, it was really good.
But, the last part for me at least, didn't fit quite right, but It was still good.

:)
Kara

This could so be a song
love it
truely the flow, that beat, the rhyme
5/5

This was a very sweet poem

although for this line
"Holding my high above the rest"
it should be
"Holding me high above the rest"

you just used my instead of me. great job though.
5/5