I like this poem alot it reminds me of a friend she's always tried to get away but just can't

This was a very nicely written poem, with a great rhyme. this poem is the form of ghazal which is one of the classic style of writing, and one of the best.
keep it up dear.

Wow, that was really good, and it painted a lovely picture... As sad as that picture might be. And excellent poem, and I enjoyed reading it! 5/5

Ravyn

Wow...I liked the descriptions and explanations here so much..The topic was unique and the wording was so suitable with this masterpiece
Beatifully written,
Laura

This is a really strong and intense poem, even though it is short, it really draws the reader in though, and you can almost feel the poem as you read it.
good job, 5/5
gabriella

Such a lovely poem. Rhyme is excellent.
Awesome job dear, 5/5

Simply awsome, great rhyme, great story, great poem.
youve quite the talent, keep it up.

Well written

I really liked this one. i had a lil bit of a hard time w/ the 4th stanza, but i really liked it. 5/5 for you.

The evil wind whips me around into your waiting arms
Even though I try to leave, I fall prey unto your charms

With words like syrup so dripping and so sweet
You whisper the words 'I love you' and I know that I am beat

i love these lines they make the poem so darkly excellent. well done xoxo

Beautiful and outstanding. Short and sweet with all poetic qualities. You have just written it in the way it should be and its just fllawless. 5/5 all the way.
Tc

Another amazing poem.The flow and the feeling just seems to be so easy for you to set free.Love it.Keep up the good work

I love it!! you use almost a twisted fantasy to describe reality!! Excellent!!

U are definetly one of the best poets I have ever seen. Amazing I never pictured winter like tht. Please comment on a poem thnks

This is a great poem, i like the detail you have used good job