Comments : When

  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsey

    I loved the last line and how you said "looking straight in your eyes"...those five words show complete honesty in a relationship...my boyfriend now always says "look me in the eye and say it"..to know that I'm being honest...I must say thats always important in a relationship, but obvisouly you know that!
    I thought this poem was so enjoyable because in three simple stanzas you showed your love very clearly! Nice write Cathy!

  • 16 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    I read this and i was like awwwwwwwwww
    I need a hug now :) its a beautifull devotion and you know i love all your poems #1 fan :) 5/5