How endearing. The fact that the subject, whilst in deep sorrow inside, was comforted by Nature. I always adore pieces in regards to the subject of nature, and this one is no exception. I further adored how you portrayed a poetic mind - "...the most confusing place to be. undescribable sites. a very fearful plea..." - enchanting! Nice work, nonetheless. Keep on writing. all the best and take care. ~Marian
Wonderfully written piece, very deep and emotional. Great job. 5/5
My favorite stanza is: "a poets mind
is the most confusing place to be
a very fearful plea" - really amazing lines.
I really like the idea of this poem. It made it stand out from the other two "sad" poems I've read. But the consistency I saw in the others, I didn't see here as much. Overall it's a great piece, so I give it 5/5