That is really awesome! The flow is perfect and the words are very Poe-etic lol. I do think however that it would be better suited as a short story. It was really really good. 5/5 say I! : D

Really awsome poem well more like a ryming story like a better more mature version of a dr suess story......thats a good thing lol i liked it it is going under my favs but your wording in this part
"a ghoulish creature
Bear a name of more ghastly feature than the tender, almost,
Slender, oh, and friendlier name of Dai. I surely dont, I

Assure that I dont! "

its great but you might wanna try to work on it a little i got a little confused but great write

always
laura

I liked how you riched this poem with sentences between...the flow and wordig was great on it
Well done,
Laura