Comments : Within Your Arms

  • 16 years ago

    by bacha

    I loved this one very much:):):)

    really great one :):):)

    keep up:):):)

  • 16 years ago

    by m e g a n

    Love It....Seems like this is happending more and more often sadly. Including to me.....5/5 keep it up xoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by Chemistry

    Wow, you have a way with words... ^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by Alesha

    That was excellent.

    It's like you were pulling thoughts out of my head.

    High vote, for sure :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Brook

    This reminds me of something i went through recently, so i raelly like this one. you did a beautiful job with it. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by paul alexander

    I love your poem, keep on keeping on ok

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    You all poem was aggressive. but you this stanza realy touched my hear

    Twisted arms, strangled legs
    Shivering under the canopy
    Of everything I shared with you

    i realy enjoyed while reading your poem
    take care 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by m e g a n

    Love it.
    It reminds me of my ex mike.
    He broke up with me cuz he didnt feel
    right datting me and doing drugs so he
    gave up.
    But i wanted to keep fighting.
    <3
    illovethingone.....