Comments : I give you all of me

  • 16 years ago

    by DeathlyAmore

    Amor.

  • 16 years ago

    by Raychil

    I really liked this poem. It was so sweet and beautiful. I like the feeling in it as well. It was very well written and it was from your heart. Marvelous.
    <3Raych

  • 16 years ago

    by skynerraw

    Wow, this is so sweet, I loved it,

    I'm sorry that you lost love before
    But I'm glad that you're able to start again
    Hopefully things will be better this time
    Maybe I'll be loved more than a friend

    ^^^My favorite stanza!

    But the rest I still loved, lots of emotion, well written...
    5/5!