Comments : Cold

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is actually very good. i like it and how you have described whats happening and it does give you the undeerstanding of feeling trapped and never hitting the ground. well done xxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Oh my god, this one's truly amazing!!! You're great writer. I like absolutely everything about this poem. 5/5 , but you deserve more ;]