Great poem well written and flow was good, wording was great in it , but it was deep and dark feel the lost love in it,anger and hate. Great write did an excellent job. MIA Caro I don't understand what this is though, it doesn't help the poem throwing capital letters in it , other than that good job. keep it up, your friend Tracy dean 5/5

I really like this one its amazing x

Your writing was excellent, I really liked the poem