Wow. this is really sad. but its still really good
<3jess
keep it up

WWWOOOWW that was so touching, i can relate to this also with someone else, u have amazing talent ,never stop writing poems they are so good xx

Very well written!

Nice one my man it's really good.

It was so sad and sorrowful
My fave lines are;

why should it be him that you are touching secretly

why is him that your eyes are desiring

yes i know why its not me

Keep it up,
Laura

Very sad but good and beautiful!

Really good,Well done