Comments : Me and you

  • 16 years ago

    by beautiful xx disaster

    Wow. this is really sad. but its still really good
    <3jess
    keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by katy

    WWWOOOWW that was so touching, i can relate to this also with someone else, u have amazing talent ,never stop writing poems they are so good xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Connie

    Very well written!

  • 16 years ago

    by Mack Bopape

    Nice one my man it's really good.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    It was so sad and sorrowful
    My fave lines are;

    why should it be him that you are touching secretly

    why is him that your eyes are desiring

    yes i know why its not me

    Keep it up,
    Laura

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarahh

    Very sad but good and beautiful!

  • 12 years ago

    by Abandoned Angel

    Really good,Well done