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  • 12 years ago

    by Brittney

    Second stanza second line, I think is should be has. Just thought I'd tell you.
    Other than that. This is a great poem. I really enjoyed it.
    *Brittney

  • 12 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    Beautifully but painfully written 5/5 i especially liked this stanza:

    "Everything that made me, me
    Is now rested in your hand
    I lost myself in you
    Like water absorbs into sand"

    fantastic piece!

    xD
    ~NinjaGirl~

  • 12 years ago

    by xxdOnTbReAkMyHeArtxx

    This poem is great. keep up the awesome work! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    Fantastically written.. I really like some of the creativity on your lines.. the use of your feelings to try to explain it to someone else is difficult.. You have conveyed your thoughts wonderfully, and it's a sad poem. Very well done. 5/5 xx

  • 11 years ago

    by you will never forget me

    This is amazzingly written..I love it. <3