Second stanza second line, I think is should be has. Just thought I'd tell you.
Other than that. This is a great poem. I really enjoyed it.
*Brittney

Beautifully but painfully written 5/5 i especially liked this stanza:

"Everything that made me, me
Is now rested in your hand
I lost myself in you
Like water absorbs into sand"

fantastic piece!

xD
~NinjaGirl~

This poem is great. keep up the awesome work! 5/5

Fantastically written.. I really like some of the creativity on your lines.. the use of your feelings to try to explain it to someone else is difficult.. You have conveyed your thoughts wonderfully, and it's a sad poem. Very well done. 5/5 xx

This is amazzingly written..I love it. <3