I fear to expose a wound I've cradled for so long
my judgment fails me when I hear her sad song"
-my favorite lines
Really well written,lots of emotion
I really liked it.
Keep it up.
-Elizabeth

I love your poem..its greatly written...you kept your theme constent in the poem...i like your metaphor of the wall and how you are trying to rebuild it ...its a great metaphor ..great job
-alicia

Now this seems to be a most well written poem. Clear and imaginative. This verse is so prophetic of life itself:

"Ragged shoes return to the road
naught has changed to lessen the load
each long stride is harder than the last
no distance eases the weight of the past"

Great poem.
Great rhyming, and the right words.

" but your words may do more harm than good
as you stand at the place where my wall once stood "

My favoutite lines
Wonderful piece of writing.
Take care