Short, but very well writen. Your choice of words at the beginning were the best. They ryhmed and flowed really well! The idea of using feelings made me like this poem even more! Keep it up, 5/5

Hatori
AKA Ashley
The Illusionist

You can say a lot in a short poem...You do it better than a lot of people, I bet a lot of people can relate to this.=D

It's a good poem, showing that your inner feeling has a metaphorical voice

Great poem! it has alot of meaning and depth. i think on your last sentance you should take out "And" and "Let" and put letting. it would make your poem flow alot more. Anyway i really like this poem its great
5/5
-Kamille

I LIKE IT BUT ELABORATE I REALLY DIDN T GET IT

This is really good, i like it =D x x

This is really good, i like it =D x x

I like how you describe hidden feelings. I know how you feel cause i lock mine up too....Great poem! Very well written!

Now this one is freakin' powerful. That's what I'm talking about. You didn't say anything about what was going on literally, yet I saw your emotions vividly. Great job on this one! 5/5