Great poem. It's a feeling that I'm sure many can relate with. 5/5

"My life slowly falls apart
But no one will ever know
What I feel deep inside
That I have so much sorrow"

As soon as I started reading this, I felt like the words had been ripped out from a page of my life book. I can really relate to this one. I hide alot of pain inside. The sad thing is people think they know you, but really they dont know the first thing about you. This was a really great poem!

Take Care:)

Hey, thanks for the comment!! this is really good and fits together really well