Wow! that was such an amazing poem love :) my favorite stanza was,
"Pain is always found, seen and spoken,
Angels cry in despair, as demons slowly choke them.
Kept in hell, never truly burning,
Lost in a lesson, with nothing ever learning. "
The whole poem was so intriguing and so powerful. i truley loved it. 5/5 mate.

This poem, is great by any means. It's discriptive and painful; strong and interesting, truly a work to be proud of. My only thought about what should be changed is the, 'the,' in the last line, it extends that last line one syllable too long.

Great work otherwise.

Dearly,
~Richi~