Comments : Move Out!

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Graet poem my friend , you really did a good job on this one , very proud of you , wording was excellent and the flow was great , wonderfully written from the heart , my favorite line was:

    One day at a time is all you can do
    To get used to the freedom will bee a new
    Everyday will start to become a breeze
    You can finally rest with ease!
    great job, your friend Tracy d 5/5