Comments : Little girl and a butterfly

  • 16 years ago

    by geeeeee

    "Little girl walks alone and out of sight,
    Thinking if out there might be some better life,
    Without pain and without grief,
    Maybe without woe and without casualty,"

    Aw wow, this was a really heartbreaking poem. Maybe there is a place, a time where we can go to, where there will be no woe, no casualties. A poignant write. You really have a talent in putting emotions into your poetry!

    Take Care:)