That is sweet as can be... it is good you have those memorys with her... 5/5.. I hope this new love of your's blossems....

I wished you could have written more about it, whereas I did enjoy reading this tiny piece of work. It's amazing how those moments turned into precious remembrances of times past. Love, like Life, is indeed a [constant] change. Nicely done, Sir. =] Keep on writing. I hope you all the best and take care. ~Marian

This is so beautiful!...so sweet but sad..i love it..
~maria

ps: thanks for commenting!

Great poem well written and sweet , full of love and happy thoughts , well done, like it ,,,,your friend Tracy d

Touching, sweet, yet sad poem.
Great piece of writing.
Take care

I love the ending you used here..beautiful and moving.
I found this to be touching and heartbreaking at the same time, and beautifully written.
You managed to put a lot of emtoion into a relatively short piece...well done.

Love it 5/5

* $heila *